miyaviloves

Taken down due to publishing

Hey thanks both for clearing that up for me :D! It's much appreciated! Meevs x

I saw it the other day. I must admit I was a little dissapointed. Venom was only in it for like half an hour!!! Plus i thought it was a ...

I'm not sure if this is the right place to post this? But anyway, I am looking through Literacy Agents to help Pulish my Ice Cubes piece (As my creative ...

Alainna, i went to london the other day as my friend took part in Musicool on channel 4 (did you see it?) and we got invitged to the final performance. ...

It's pretty bluey hair nice :D 9/10

hey JC thanks for the tips! I would never let my parents read my stuff, they are so like prim in their ideas...they would definatly not approve of Ice Cubes! ...

Your writing is good, but i must say Panic! at the disco??? Lol sorry not one of my favourite bands. Anyway, back to the writing, are you going to do ...

its going very slowly and its sooo annoying :( It's out of my hands now though and well all i can do is wait!!

Well, i was starting to get jealous because like everyone else has one of these pages so yes I thought I should have an about me too, and it is ...

Hmm this wasn't as good as your other pieces, i guess not much really happened..you had a lot os she said mom said's in there, you could vary that out ...

Ok i liked the start of this, the whole No giggling down the phone bit was good and original. But i didn't like the end. You kept the whole thing ...

Wow, i liked it. Its so true about friendship. I especially loved the secrets out in pulbic bit, thats the problem, with falling out with people! Anyway, well done this ...

Ok you have the tense a little bit all over the place here. He pets the beast gently This is happening as we read it, but... and slipped a soldier ...

Ok so this is about Warhammer? As i have never played it I can give you some feedback from just a reader! With their stealth camo activated, they were like ...