miyaviloves

It was reallllly good! The onion (Metaphor? I'm terrible with actually seeing the meaning of things) theme through out was original, well thought of. Keep up the good work! Meevs ...

I can only really echo what shadow said. YOu would have been a very clever person to have made up your own language! What do you think, would Dugon (do ...

This was deleted for some reason when I posted it last night. If there's any reason for why it was deleted, could somebody tell me? I'm not sure if it ...

Thank you both for taking your time to read this :) I always appreciate it! Nyame - (what a pretty username) Me and my friend did that in school! My ...

I'm also revising for As, its terrible argh dunno how I am going to cope with A level :(

I agree with the money reward thing. David beckham has now joined the campaign to find Maddie, but I can't help that think that no matter how many celebrities join ...

I remember doing something very similar to this diary in the war thing in history at school. Mine however was about a page long and was full f nothing lol. ...

Yup everything has already been said that I could have pointed out here. the characters all make much more sense now, and I think you havea rgeat development in the ...

No crit's yet? what what? anyway... She swept a hand along her face and tucked it behind an ear. I had to read this a couple of times to make ...

Well, i thin kthat all has been said has been said with this one, I loved it! Im glad i read part four and came back to read the rest ...

Ok I have not read the other parts of this, but I will go back and read those after! panting heard hard? Kristie looked at her knife before putting it ...

ireally enjoyed reading this, just one line however bothered me: "and bash" the word bash does go with thrash yes, but I just don't think its fits in really with ...

If you spaced this out it would be much easier to read, you might get a few more reviews that way :) Anyway... His bloody corpse and mangled body lay ...

You should be very proud of this, I enjpyed reading every bit of it, which is weird, I don't have anything to point out here. Just well done! Meevs x

I have to agree with Write Me, it is a little too repetative for my liking. Repetition in poems can work realy well, But I hate to say that I ...