miyaviloves

Oooh i liked this, very intriguing! I think all that needed to be pointed out Ofour pretty much covered, so I can just tell you how much i liked it ...

Hey welcome to YWS! Yeah the things under the names (novice, writer etc) are ranks, depending on how many posts you have posted :) Meevs x

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I agree with McMourning, I too have read poems that have been oublished that are like this, you clearly have the talent to write! Meevs x

This is really good! Really REALLY good! You have such unique and well developed characters, I love it! Meevs x

Another good re-write here, again it sounds very professional. I'm a little confused at thew moment though, with whats new and stuff? Are you just doing re-writes at the moment, ...

the waves B eaken us to come Is there any reason why is it capitalised? therder IS this supposed to be further? angery Angry glicining Glistening B ilding Again why ...

I dont know much about poems, and formatting them or anything I wilkl just tell you what I thought of the poem :) I really liked this one, It fit ...

You make the courtrooom seem real in this, I thin kyou have got everything right and It soiunds all very professionally done :P Jamie threw here -Just an extra e ...

Indeed it is :)

!! love the profile song Jules :P xx

Fabien another amazing poem! I really love your stuff! This was cute, I really enjoyed reading it! Keep up your good work! Meevs x

I love and hate myspace at the time time!

I have to agree with Mandax, In all honesty I didn't even finish this poem. I don't mean to sound harsh and nasty! It just didn't grab my attention, Work ...

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