miyaviloves

I think you did well, haikus seem difficult to write even though they are very short, so i congragulate you on that! Good luck with thew rest of your work! ...

I think that the flow worked better towards the end of the poem, some of it at the beginning sounded a little forced. Other than that I liked this, but ...

I really likes this, mature writing, its original and i loved it! Like JC i can only offer praise here as i could see nothing wrong with it :D PM ...

It sounds like an Irish drinking song on crack. - Nooo it dosen't sound like that atall, what a silly thing to say :? Anyway, I don't think people can ...

Ah thanks for posting the chapter orders, will make it easier to follow :) Tammy is back yay! Gosh I cant tell you how much i love POD, its soooo ...

Hello both :) Alainna - The door thing does have quite a big importance, but you will find that on in later chapters, I too thought it was a little ...

Lol i liked nthis, funny and original at the same time. But I'm not really sure what's going on in all honesty, but I did enjoy reading it! I couldnt ...

Taken down due to publishing

Again another great peice here, Im really loving this! yay! (and you can PM when the next bit is done, I wou,d have missed this is you hadn't of messaged ...

FANTASTIC!!! Awwwwwwww. Is he going to get in touch with Chris and Rob??? You will have to wait and see :P Jaimiy (Did I spell that completely wrong??) Jamiy :D ...

I can only really echo what Kylan has said! I really loved this, its unique and your writing style is amazing, keep this up, you are very talented! Meevs xxx

I have to agree with Clau, it did sound a little bit thrown together like. But don;t get me wrong, there is something here, if you work at it you ...

Hello and welcome! I'm sure you will fit in nicely here! Yup you an also message me if you need anything, always happy to help :) Meevs x

I agree with Greenjay about it sounding a bit rushed, but I did like it. And yeah, what is this part of? the geinning of a novel? In other words, ...

hey :) yeah there is a number 25 somewhere, its in my protfolio, I just posted 24.5 it got a little ocnfyusing, sorry about that! Meevs xx