miyaviloves

I agree very much with Clua and OMG, i did really enjoy this poem. But I also agree with Clau that I couldn't really find it's meaning, if it has ...

I agree with most people, I liked the second one best, and yeah like author13 said, without the rail it would be very abstract, but I do like it the ...

I thought that was a really cute poem, but i would have to agree with Mad on some of his suggestions. I like your vocabulary range, you use words so ...

I don't like to be too harsh when i critique, but I am honest. The only trimes I don'treally give a in-depth crit is when loads of people before me ...

I nearly missed this! And yes a little strange but that's what makes it good, original! I love the style of you're writing, its mature yet also quite laid back ...

Hey and welcome to YWS! You will fit in great here, and it's really easy to start posting and shizzle :) So what kind of stuff do you write? Meevs ...

I'm so gald that she is talking to Tom, I think that she needs him! Another great part here Alainna! Uh-hum!” That was a man in a suit that was ...

Aww i didn't notice that you had posted more >.< Again loved it loved it loved it, SOOO funny! PM me when you post mroe of this so I don't ...

I disagree with Ofour, I didn't think it sounded awkward atall, I liked this piece in all honesty. Call me stupid but I didn't notice the I guess it didn't ...

oooh I really liked this! Very mature, and good sense of your characters and such! Ok, so I was a little confused, but as you said it was a little ...

I enjoyed reading this, althought the second line was kind of expected - looking in :P Over all i thin kyour structure and flow was good, and you kept it ...

I think out of the poems I have read by you, that this is by far my favourite. Its very descriptive without it being to exessive, I really enjoyed it ...

I prefer this poem muchly to your Cutting one, this one is much more original, and over all a better poem, keep doing things like this one! Meevs x

Im sorry but this was such a cliche poem! I know that you wrote this maybe trying to give a message across, but it's been done sooooo many times before! ...

Yay part three! Thanks for messaging me about it :P Rolling out of bed and he hit the giant ‘off’ button on top of the alarm clock. - this sentence ...