miyaviloves

I agree that this was entrancing, I actually really liked this, original, and just quite...I don't know what the word is so I will just reapted and use entrancing :) ...

Oooh it's interesting to see people's thoughts on chris! I have actually grown to love him...weird thing eh? Anywho thankyou both for the reviews, And yeah Alianna Jamiy's mood is ...

I agree with Anthaslunula (did i spell that right? hehe) that this is a good start but you could definatly make it better, a bit more description of the characters ...

Robert and Christopher Peering around my front door, I felt that kind of mixture of excitement and dread mix up inside my stomach. I also felt kind of embarrassed, I ...

Hullo Fabien! The warmth kisses our frozen cheeksas Cheeksas? Shoudl this be cheeks? I liked this, you're writing is very poetic, descriptive and it works very well, I noticed that ...

Hey thanks for reviewing Mat hope you enjoy the rest :) Meevs x

I like how you change the voice, it gives a good insight into each characters thoughts without like saying that you are changing the point of view, its rather swanky! ...

Hmm, I didn't quite get it? It might be because I don't know what oscillations means/are...I will look it up :D All the best, Meevs x

No sorry m'dear, I didn't read this, first off you need to space the writing, It's just a hell of a lot easier to read, especially on computers where it ...

Yeah I did like this aswell, but I think that you could make it even better :D Some of the sentences seem a little too long: Her parents, who had ...

I'm a little confused as to how you will be posting this, Chapters that aren't from Corrie? Sorry a little confused here, might be because I am sleepy though lol. ...

I too found this very humourous :D But in all honesty I have only skipped through the film :( I should really watch it all the way through one day ...

Taken down due to publishing

Hi again! I'm here to review yay! over lukewarm coffee and a cruller -Realllllllly don't mean to sound dumb here but what is a cruller? which was slowly rising and ...

I really enoyed this piece, you said that you were not going to continue this but I reallt think you could make something of it! Yor description seems very well ...