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The Calm before the storm? Oh yes! hehe. Anyway IM BACK!!!! Finished exams now and Here is the long awaited next chapter of Ice Cubes wheeey! Rated PG-13 for slightly ...

YAY! I'm so happy! Part 7! I'm glad that things seem to be coming together for her, and I hope it's a little boy! All the best, Meevs xx

I had to do this for GCSE!! Ok, i think Kitty sorted out the begining there, but I think that you could show that maybe Lennie did sucseed in his ...

Heloooooooooo! “You to…” Amber said, -Too This was very emotional, and great writing JC. Hope she wins! all the best, Meevs x

Hmm...This was good JC but I don't think that there is much here, compared to your POD pieces this is not very indepth atall. BUt then again I hsouldn't compare ...

Ello! Sorry it took me agggges to read this, just been feeling sooooooo lazy lately oops :P Anyway...WOW! I loved this aprt, you built up the tension of Emma looking ...

Hello :) A soft pink glow slowly began to light the dark room, The start ere sounds a little cliche, the soft glow kind of thing...but I don't have any ...

Eee like always it was brilliant! You always capture lot's of emotion in your writing, i think that the mistakes have already been pointed out here :). All the best, ...

I never write poems, in fact I avoid them, however I was feeling very emotional at the time when I wrote this. -Same here, istay verrry clear of poetry and ...

Yeah like everrryone had said verrrry short, but I'm sure you can join some of the chapters together when you have written more and stuff. As for this piece, it ...

Wow that was quite a reviewing frenzy! Thanks for all you're comments, and I hope you enjoy the rest of Ice Cubes :D xx

End of Chapter Robert and Christopher ***************************** Dinner was incredibly awkward, not as I anticipated it to be. Becca was in a terrible mood, I put it down to her ...

I dod change tenses a lot by accident in Ice Cubes! But the new version is all sorted, like all the same tense. It's also verrrrry different to the Ice ...

Running with scissors - Augusten Burroughs Eee my favourite book ever!

Hey incase you didn't see I made this into a thing for my Ice Cubes story, although i still might keep this as a separte thing, I'm just not sure ...