miyaviloves

Yay part five :D Writers block is SUCH a pain! The clock claimed it was nine am but he knew it was really eight. Maybe you should explain this, is ...

hey hope you like it here its super easy to fit in and stuff :) need any help just PM me, as well as if you need any crits on ...

Why is there a new post for this???? :S

Thankyou both for the comments, and thanks Royboy for pointing out those mistakes, i will fix them laters :) I will work on the showing instead of telling thing, I'm ...

It was sweet, is there anymore of this? I'm not realllly sure what it's about in all honesty. I think you could describe why she has these bubbles, why are ...

Ok, this can be read on it's own but it's like the follow up to Ice Cubes my first novel. Hope you enjoy and maybe understand some of it ^_^, ...

Lol I didn't know what I was doing either, infact when I first joined I didn't do anything atall :| but now I'm addicted and I',m sure you will be ...

Hmm the idea here is very sweet, but I think you need to add a lot more emotion into this and get the flow sorted out, I think you mainly ...

Hihi! Here I go to review :D . But I thought we could have a little bet." Here you are missing some speech marks But if you can't, you're going ...

Hmm...I'm really not sure about this in all honesty, there are tons of mistakes and well, I'm not sure if you were doing it on purpose, like, she was simple ...

Heyo! I read this lasy night but didn't have enough time to post a review so here it is. First off 6 weeks?! NOOOOOO!!!!!!!! Why?! And second I enjoyed it ...

JC!!!! Your writing just gets better and better! She had already lost all the respect she'd never had. Was never supposed to be ever here? It's just that the sentence ...

Taken down due to publishing

I swear I had reviwed this!!!!!!!!! I must have just read it and make comments in my mind.... Anywho! Very very very happy that she got off! now just need ...

I cannot see the meaning in this either. To be honest with you I didn't like it, I felt it was just there and I think you concerntrated more on ...