miyaviloves

7/10 hmm..

I think the mistakes made have already been pointed out by Esme, so there isnt really much else for me to critique here. but I took the time to read ...

I really really liked this. I liked the lack of punctuation (other than the few feull stops) it made the pace really quick in my head and it worked so ...

I also noticed that you have made two posts, one Im assuming is this, for future reference befoire you post your own work you should have atleast reviewed two other ...

Sorry but I didnt like this atall, I dont think the repetition worked it just got really annoying. I didint think there was any real meaning behind it, and what ...

It is hard to critique this as it is such a personal thing to you, and I think this is written very well. Although I think it would be nice ...

I sure hope that none of us are mean or scary!!! We try not to be ;) Look forward to seeing some of yoyr work, if you need any help ...

I really really liked this, and for a short piece (I assume you are not going to be adding anything else???) it works really well. You said it was a ...

Welcome to the YWS! Kitty prety much explained what goes on around here so if you have any other questions feel free to message me and I will always be ...

I havea pond full of fish but they arent really pets though so yes i dont have a pet fish :( The person below me dosen't like coffee

"Is that the phone?" "No it's the hoover bag" - Beautiful Thing

I dont know if you have or not :D The person below me has cold hands :(

Banned for having less than 100 reviews!

Not scared really, just dont really like them :) The person below me had to use an umbrella today.

I really really liked this, your style of writing is effective, short sentences in this case work really well. Im sad that this is a true story though :( She ...