miyaviloves

If my revised version fails, then I think I'll move on to the next chapter first. Then come back again. -I find that when I am writing a longer piece ...

Hello, I just reviwed your first chapter so hello again and welcome to the YWS :) I hope you like it here with us, and like I said in your ...

ok first thing, here at the YWS its a general rule and understanding to have a 2:1 ratio on reviewing work before posting your own, remember this in the future ...

Ah stolen hearts so pretty! *steals your glasses* Right ok this is me: And this is me and my friends last year at a party and we all look super ...

6/10 :) No its Louis Garrel :)

1/10 has got old now :(

This made me smile :) I don't really like to comment on grammatical or other poetery issues as I can't write poetry so I feel like a bit of a ...

This was a sweet little story but I noticed some of the following things: our first job through our 20th job. - eh? I dont get that :S it had ...

reason :)

Please review two other pieces of work before you post your own stuff. Anyway, like Suzanne said that writing got really annoying and towards the end I just skipped it, ...

I don't think it was too short atall, I think it was just right, and I love the imagery it creates. I do however feel that there is something missing ...

Ok that was short, wayyyy too short, I know it is a prologue, but prologues are supposed to give us some background information, this really didnt give me anything. there ...

Thatannagirl picked out the mistakes I found, so all I can say it that I really loved this, especially the dialogue, it helped add more to the characters. Also really ...

9/10 love that picture, really pretty, and black and white is the best :D

That was sweet, much better than your other piece, and I really likes the ending of this. The dialogue worked well, sometimes it dosen't in poetry but in this it ...