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Re: My mother
Infact me thinking that it was about a space man bothered me so much I had to go and look it up: Mother, any distance greater than a single span ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: My mother
First you need to review two other pieces of work before you post your own, its kind of a rule here, mkay? This is ok, and I like that its ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: I've been here two years.
I have been on two years too :D
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {three}
Yet again my comment is just going to be that silly little one on the end! This is all im going to read up to today, so I will read ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: The Mask Maker
Wow I really liked this beginning, at first I didnt know why he was standing there, thinking maybe he was one of the people that arrested him, after the "See ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {two}
Wow another great part here, and your description of the elephant boy was amazing, like Angel said, it was just like he was standing in front of me. Im really ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {one}
Well seeing as everything has been pointed out already this is just going to be one of those redundant little comments at the end just saying whey well done :) ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: The Elephant Boy {twelve}
Wow I started reading this and I haven't read any of the other chapters, but I have to say that I love it!!! Your style of writing is so unique, ...
Oct 17, 2008 -
Re: Beyond This - Practice Introduction
First of all I noticed that you haven't reviewed any other pieces on here, its a general rule that for every piece of your work that you post you should ...
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: Ancient history
Have you tried wikipedia? I find all my lifes answers on there? :D
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: When Brakes Are A Bad Thing
This is okay for a short story, but as it stands it is just okay. I think you need to tell us more about this party, at the moment Im ...
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: "Paint" Lightsabres
Um...well they look like light sabres, were you trying to make them different some how??
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: Jail bird- Ch 1: wrong footing>fix it
OK this is probably going to realllly annoy you but I used to staudy law and I know this is a story and is going to lean towards the fantasy ...
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: Past. Present. Future.
Well that certainly was unusual. But I really liked it! Are you going to continue with this? Now then. there are some parts that sound confused, but it might just ...
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: A poem written after i tripped on acid once, well almostjava
I really liked this! I'm not going to say anything technical because I dont really understand too much about the technical side of poetry. But I really honestly did like ...
Oct 16, 2008