miyaviloves

Thanks for messaging me about this second part, just sorry it has taken me couple of days to get round to it! Anyway, down to the review: I like that ...

OK well seeing as the grammatical things have been pointed out I can only now give you my opinion on this! At the moment it is too short, but I ...

Hey Kitty. Sorry to be harsh here but I really didn't like this, I found it pointless and annoying. It's not really a prologue, it dosen't give us background onto ...

Probably been drummed into my head so many time by my teachers now that I actually believe them :D

I can relate to anything related to anorexia, my best friend is suffering from it and this is exactly what I tell her every day. Shes so thin she looks ...

Im still not sure what to make of this even now its in the 'other' section. Useful facts there, but its not exactly a writing piece. Im sure anyone oculd ...

Go message Nate about this??? Hes the only one who can delete accounts.

Ok so is she going to be 13 in the story? At the moment there is not really anything else to say...maybe a bit more about her personality and lifestyle? ...

I felt that this was all very rushed. You weren't giving enough time or consideration to your characters. I think the opening chapter was quite weak, it was a fire, ...

Hey welcome to the YWS! First off we have a ratio of two reviews for each piece of your own work that you post, but I see you have already ...

Hey Kay, welcome to the YWS! Dont worry you wont be a newbie for long :D I really wanted to do a degree in creative writing but unfortunatly I fell ...

hey welcome to the YWS! Oh i love painting and drawingggg so much! Almost as much as writing, well...almost! If you have any questions about the site or just want ...

Hey welcome to the YWS! If you need any help with anything on the site feel free to drop me a message and I will do my best to help ...

hey welcome to the YWS, try posting some more news about this in other forums on the site, Im sure a lot of people will be itnerested, but not everyone ...

Hello! Welcome to the YWS! If you ever need help on here with anything feel free to leave me a private message and I will be happy to help out ...