miyaviloves

Only thing was, why did you repeat part of the prologue in this? IF you are goign to keep it there then there is probably not much point of it ...

Well I went to part three and thought it might be better to read from the beginning first :P First off, Jamie is the best boys name in the world ...

Hey! This was a really interesting piece, are you going to turn it into a longer story or something? The only mistake I noticed was: I lost myself is stories ...

This seemed all very confused and rushed...let me explain: The wind slightly picked up making the few specks of hair the man had not covered by the hat that was ...

I did like this but I felt that the narrator contradicted themselves without meaning to. I DON’T WANT HIM! -Caps really distract from the work, maybe use italics here or ...

You know I dont mind the people at the bottom of the picture, it adds something somehow. I lvoe the sky in this picture, it looks so dooming and opposing, ...

I really do love the patterns you use! Its so cool and unique I love it! Definalty adds something to the picture, makes it stand out from the others. Wish ...

Wow I really love these, the pictures are so crisp and clear its amazing! Did you edit these on photoshop or something? They just look so perfect! What kind of ...

Aww I really like this. I like the patterns you used in it, it is really nice to see something different other than shading, it has made the hair look ...

This is good and I can definalty see the Liv Tyler influence in there :D I agree with Vox about the nose thing it is a little unnaturally long, and ...

Im not sure who Bella is so I will just comment on the picture :) I think its good but your colouring could be imporoved slightly, try shading a bit ...

Yeah a good picture for a ten year old to have taken :) Do you have photoshop? YOu could do some pretty cool stuff with this if you do, like ...

I really want to do Nano this year, I tried last year and I never finished and just kinda gave up. I just worry about not having enough time, I ...

Hey Elle welcome to the YWS! Glad you are enjoying the site so far - it is really great Nate does a lot for us :D I would reccomend that ...

Hey Welcome to the YWS! (Kind of???) Ok first things first, there is a rulke here that for every piece of your own writing that you post you need to ...