miyaviloves

Thank you so so so much for all these critiques, all of you are great and have helped so much! I have now edited this and will post the revision ...

Done :)

Hello! OK, first thing's first, is the whole story going to be written in letter form? If it is I would suggest reading 'We Need To Talk About Kevin' which ...

Canada - thankyou for taking the time to read! Sarah - Thankyou so so much! That really helped. I'm finding this piece quite difficult to write as It is set ...

Heylo! Could you if you get the chance take a look at this for me: It's super short, its a small piece from a novel I am writing and it's ...

WELCOME Hello come in take off your shoes and get comfy. I'm an instructor now so I want to give some really good reviews, so instead of mindlessly wandering around ...

Hi Twilight! I think that before I can even begin to look at this story you need to work on formatting, spelling and punctuation here. Did you write it on ...

Ok, well first thing's first. This is not the beginning of the story, this is just a bit from one of the later chapters. I am really struggling with this ...

I do like this the simplicity works well, did you take the picture yourself? You say it is not finished yet - what are you planning on changing? And what ...

I came on from Spain last month! BUt now I am back in snowy England

Ok, I stil lthinkthe nose needs a little bit of work, otherr than that it's great, I think the shading you have done is brilliant and his hair is also ...

If this isn't part of your art work and just a picture of you there is a thread where you can post pictures of yourself :) Ok, now I will ...

Wow I think this is really good. The shading really is what gives this picture that edge ;) The hair is very good as well, you havea lot of texture ...

This is no joke, the first time in my entire life of drawing (since I was three, to be exact), that I ever drew a guy that didn't look like ...

Ah well you could just say hes a little character tribute to Neo. What is your nano about? Sounds interesting with these Neo hacker characters ;)