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Re: Finding yourself
There were a few spelling errors but overall an amazing poem that sends the reader into a whirlwind or thought. Truly great. One thought that is still in my mind, ...
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Re: Photos of Stuff
Wonderful photographs! I especially liked the 4th, 8th, 9th and 10th from the top. The ones that stood out to me most though were: the close-up of the peacock's head ...
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Re: Luminosity
Wow, that is one of the most captivating short stories I have ever read and I hope I can continue reading stories as wonderful as this forever. A little mistake ...
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Re: Cynthia's Story
You're poem is really deep and meaningful. I love the fact that it originates from a true story (I presume that the spoiler is true...). You are a great poet ...
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Re: And the Darkness Rained Upon Them
This was for a competition on DeviantArt that I didn't actually get to submit to. The rules were it had to be less than 5 pages, no character names from ...
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Re: The End.
I just wanted to say that I love the ending of your poem, the way you sum it up so simply. I love the world issues you've pinpointed here and ...
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Re: I am a waterfall
Thank-you shloka19! You don't know how good that makes me feel that you said that. Thank-you! This being my first post I am glad I got feedback so quickly, wow. ...
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Re: The last words she heard
Amazing Em! I love it. Thanks so much for letting me read you're cool poem. I have no doubt that you could be a great author or poet if you ...
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Re: I am a waterfall
I am a waterfall. I flow freely yet am channeled. I take life from the banks of canals, But I give life to creatures of earth and air. My song ...
Dec 14, 2011
