mithrim96

This is a poem I decided to write about how I have never had a boyfriend and don't really expect one. Thought I'd make it sound more woeful than it ...

Your poem views love in a negative light but it also brings up many of the aspects people seem to feel/know in love. I cannot think of anything I don't ...

This style of poetry is as unique as it is fascinating and effective. This poem, like the 'sheet music' it talks about, will remain in my head for (most likely) ...

This is a rather short poem that I feel needs more explanation into its meaning and its feel. You have a very professional vocabulary that makes me feel child-like in ...

Hello again. This poem of yours is very interesting and it had me staring at the screen in wonder. I found some of the lines a little confusing and scattered ...

This is a really powerful and emotive story. I'm glad I have had the opportunity to read it, though the goriness isn't so fun to read at night when you're ...

I have no suggestions on how to change this. I am dumbfounded and shocked. Your book sounds absolutely amazing. I want you to publish it so as I can read ...

If you go into "edit" next to the post (or in this case, lack-of) it should get rid of it... I think.

Episode 1 - "The Day I Became a Shinigami" The Hollow roars, I raise my blade, and debt to my family is repaid. Rukia Kuchiki pierced my heart, and my ...

Time ticks slowly and I'm watching the clock. My head feels like a leaden block. My teacher's mouth is a fuzzy blur. My paper's still waiting for thoughts to stir. ...

You say this poem is rusty, I say it is beautiful. I once had to write a similar poem for English class about exams and you've inspired me to go ...

I LOVE THIS SCENE FROM YOUR BOOK! It is so gory at times and mysteriously frightening at others. One query though, is the girl a demon? Because when you said, ...

I agree wholeheartedly with the last lines: Writing is magic. Nothing less, nothing more. Writing is a magical art and your poem really displays this with your great writing, I ...

Your poem made me stare wide eyed and open-mouthed at the screen in awe and deep thought, truly beautiful. The way you entrance the reader with this mystical piece is ...

Your poem made me grin! Well done, I love it. Your poetry is really thought provoking, eery, creepy and cool. Great work. It's interesting how, on certain lines, the reader ...