mithrim96

Please, please! I need someone to review my novel "The Underworld Society." It's been up for so long! I'm sorry if it's long, but you can tell me if it's ...

When you have an idea, like a new sub-story in a book you're writing or a new character or even a story or a sentence you like, WRITE IT DOWN ...

Joden Pinewood (pre Jail-time) from The Life of an Assassin It would be strange for me to be in a theme park in the first place unless a contract brought ...

Claré (from my book, The Underworld Society): My last meal? I don't know. Whatever I had for breakfast this morning in the society... ummm... that was probably noodles, I like ...

My characters name is Adam Felderman though if you have ever heard of him before it would be with the alias Joden Pinewood. He is an assassin from a time ...

Whichever one is offered to me for those three days, depending on the source, never accept food from strangers who may know you by reputation. For Breakfast: water or juice? ...

By changing their mind to suit their life and the surroundings of their time. They grow in experience. This is useful, for everything. How do you keep focused?

I'm not sure if you still need people for the story and I'm not even that positive I know how this works. But I'll give it a shot and you ...

WARNING! Some bad language and violent/creepy/stalker scenes. Prologue, Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 This is the book I have been writing for SO long. It's a story of a magic ...

This is a really beautiful and sad poem. I love it. My only problem would be the last stanza because it seems forced. That is all though. It is sad ...

When you are really in the mood to write some dark poetry. Anger is my county, Pain is my domain, Suffering is plenty, Love is my game. Remorse is the ...

Portal. I think it's because I'm reading TimeRiders.

where I stand and will stand helplessly omniscient above the dirt pathways that God, ironic, has wrought for you. in my abstinence, intelligence, I am isolated. I have lost you ...

If he had ever enjoyed his previous life, that was nothing to how he was enjoying this. Stan Jordans tilted his head to the side and slowly smiled at the ...

Your poem is really interesting and cool. I love it! I especially like these bits: Who saw your beauty when it wasn't there Who laughed on your jokes when others ...