mistielovesyou

I liked this. Very nice point and context. Like others said, another character wouldn't hurt.

Oh, you guys: this is a fantasy world. Which is why the sky changes colors like that.... It's not a real world..

I liked this, and the emotions and everything presented in this. I especially felt the desperation of the man, and his sorrow. Good writing. I wouldn't really fix anything here, ...

Thanks so much you guys, for the reviews!! I'll be sure to fix some of the errors with the phone-thing.