mistielovesyou

I like how you wrote this. I liked that it was less symbolic and more stagnant, yet still good. This is a good story. Nice writing. Good job and good ...

This is okay, but the moral is unclear. Maybe it needs a rewrite? I didn't really get the fact that he buried the fish, only that he had forgotten about ...

I love this a lot, but I wish I could know more of what the speaker was talking about. It was really good, though. I especially liked the first paragraph. ...

“You look a bit different.” As if. I’m pretty sure I've been moody for about a month. But Grace, being the kind person she is, gives me a curious glance ...

I put in hours, days, of my life for this project. My pencil creases the paper, and my hand hurts like a bitch but there's no way in hell I'm ...

Thanks for this, this was a reeeeeeally creepy story and I loved it. I haven't read something this crazy in a while, so this was nice. Kind of sadistic, though. ...

This was a nice story, and I loved how you incorporated the lines from them play into the story. Trust me, this isn't only your dream date. I liked the ...

This was a good story, but it could be improved with more background. I'd suggest you let the reader in on exactly why and how these people in Venice were ...

You wrote your descriptions very well, and this is a good story. It's so very realistic and I like how you left the problem out of it, so we don't ...

This was very good and detailed. I liked the point of view. This is probably one of the first stories I've read where the girl asks the guy out, so ...

This is a good story but it might need a little more. Probably more description or background. Plus the story kind of ends on an ambiguous note. Maybe you should ...

This was a really cute story. Very quirky and...nice. It might be a bit unrealistic, as was said by the commentor above, but I liked it. My only thing would ...

This is very good. I loved how you described human emotion, and how realistic this is. It' s great to realize that not all people have the courage to blurt ...

This is a really sweet story, and I loved it. The way you described the characters was very nice, and the detail was vivid in my head. My only thing ...

This was good. However, the first three sentences of this story were a little..passive I'll say. And it' s "I've never felt so scared" not "I never felt so scared" ...