mistielovesyou

I also think that you can't really judge an idea alone. I believe that the form and the flow of your writing, along with your idea, is what can make ...

My writing is mostly ideas I have accumulated and thought up and filtered through. And writing is a great medium to get those ideas across. It makes me feel more ...

Wow. Good. This is great! Sorry, I don't have any critique for this, it's fantastic. I love the subtle creepiness of the old man and woman murderers. You didn't over-exaggerate ...

This is really good. Wow, I'm surprised. I don't know why you haven't gotten a ton of comments. This is fantastic. The only thing I would recommend was that sometimes ...

This is a great topic, and it could use a lot of discussion. Is it the principal's fault that Marius amounted to nothing more than a high school principal? When ...

This story seems a little out of touch at times. It's really good when it gets to the characters. But when you try to "tell" the story: I can only ...

That was really very good. Well-written, and it has a lot of story in it. By that I mean that I could really get the emotion and essence of the ...

We walk through a deep meadow on foggy trees. The air is bright and blurry, like we’re in a dream. Or a fantasy. I snatch my hand away from his. ...

i need you yet you wait. for what? God knows. I know. maybe you just don’t want me maybe i’m horrible just like i’ve always suspected maybe i was right ...

This was okay. I agree with the last reviewer that this seemed a little...fake. I felt no emotion from the piece. You have a really good concept here, but it ...

It's very unique, and I very much liked the ending. But there was something about your tone at the beginning that almost led me to believe this was just another ...

Wow. Um I don't know what to say. That was genius. Very good. Um, I don't have much to critique. I loved your language and the way you weaved in ...

How i wish for a world, That doesn’t hide it’s face, That doesn’t mask the only Place it knows. A world that doesn’t wish for sparkly purple, Or glorious red, ...

how i love the world as it seeps slowly through my skin bleeds red through my fingers don’t be like the rest of the world. i want you yet you ...

In the beginning of this, I was a little confused as to who which characters were which. Just make it a little clearer because they all have same-sounding names. You ...