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Re: A Soft Spot for Me
Loving, yet slightly depressing. Its a wonderful poem though. Great job! :)
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Always Stick Together Chapter 2
Really sweet yet sad story. You may want to be a little more descriptive but overall very good. :)
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Breast cancer awareness
Well written and informative. One suggestion is moving the Family Story to the beginning to catch the readers attention. Either way its still nice. -Hunter
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: To the Bathroom
Fascinating and a little bit odd. I like it. :) -hunter
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: The Casualties of War
That was well written and had a strong plot. I liked the way the story weaves in and out between the past and the present. Good job. :3 sorry I'm ...
Nov 5, 2011