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Re: Demon- Prologue
I really enjoyed reading the prologue. I think it catches the reader's attention. The character is also interesting. I think that more colorful language could help it a lot. Some ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: A Soft Spot for Me
Loving, yet slightly depressing. Its a wonderful poem though. Great job! :)
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Always Stick Together Chapter 2
Really sweet yet sad story. You may want to be a little more descriptive but overall very good. :)
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Breast cancer awareness
Well written and informative. One suggestion is moving the Family Story to the beginning to catch the readers attention. Either way its still nice. -Hunter
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: To the Bathroom
Fascinating and a little bit odd. I like it. :) -hunter
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: The Casualties of War
That was well written and had a strong plot. I liked the way the story weaves in and out between the past and the present. Good job. :3 sorry I'm ...
Nov 5, 2011 -
Re: The Music Box
The Music Box 1. Plains. As far as the eye can see, flat farmland. Looking out one may think they can see the end of the earth, an eternal road ...
Nov 5, 2011