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Re: Untitled chapters 1-3
For Ellie, George, and Connor (Because we could totally survive any apocalypse) 1 ‘Hunter! Help! Don’t let the monsters get me!’ five year old Danny shouted as a rotting arm ...
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Re: What if We Just Exist
It's like, I've had this epiphany -- Everything is clear. About the dead, the empty, the spent. About our greatest fear. We walk through this world, Facing struggles every next ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: A Cloudy Night
I look up to the clouds, The suns embers begin to die. I see their gentle, wispy grey. Soft swirls of silver sing in the sky. I look up high ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Ode to A(utomatic) Door
Press your ear firmly against these waves, I don't understand this line and hear a miracle you fail to see on busy days. This magnificent creation of man, I love ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: Angel Harrison
Wow. That was amazing. I really like this. Although Im a bit confused on her intelligence. She seems to have a large vocabulary for a 4 and 5 year old. ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: And They Call Me Insane
My Story Isn’t very long A divorce A beating A rape A pleading And after that I wanted death Like an old friend I just wanted it to end A ...
Nov 7, 2011 -
Re: the dog how lost everthing
there was this dog how was married and two kids one day the two kid dogs ran in frant of the car and dired two mouths later his wife dired ...
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Re: City
I am not sure if you meant to use the word sky twice, but it would not have been my choice. The poem is gloomy and dark, obviously. It did ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Writer's Nightmare
I am sure we can all relate to this. Nice use of literary devices (especially personification). I am awful with grammar, so I won't be much help there. I think ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Oh, hello there. Im new. :) I am actually more of a story teller than writer, but I thought why not? Im home schooled and usually live in America, yet ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Dark Dreams
Overall, I liked this poem. I'm sure most people can relate to the fear of the dark. As a child I was terrified. It captured the the readers imagination. Nice ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: A Suicide Note
A Suicide Note: 10 I hear the footsteps 9 I see the shadow 8 I feel the hands 7 I smell the alcohol 6 I hear the threats 5 I ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Oh, the Things I Just Don't Need
I liked the title and the poem. Its well written. Yet, I think you should have a little bit more use of vocabulary. (I can barely use correct grammar so ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Type Your Username With Your Elbow
one elbow- mnissxjhn dfedfrxstglololdc two elbows- m kjasasjjjun sdsdeglolkfc EPIC FAIL
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: Koizora
I like the way you review movies. You are slightly comical, especially when you point out the obvious. You're blunt and to the point and it helps see a clearer ...
Nov 6, 2011
