misstoria

I really love the fairytale quality of this poem. SOme parts are dark, but I like that, it seems real. The ending leaves loose ends, butI still like it. You ...

I really loved this poem. It has some gramatical mistakes, but otherise i really liked it. Keep up the good work.

money ain't powerTV ain't fun and love is truly not enough I recomend you change "aint" to the word isn't

I wrote this for my special someone and I'm not to sure about it. Any comments would be welcome. You open the doors You let me in Your way of ...

I liked the poem, but I agree with everyone on the line that sounds like she is self centered. Otherwise it is pretty good. I don't believe it needs a ...

Reaching out I cusp one, two in each hand. If you removed two in each hand, the flow would be much better. Otherwise i loved the poem and the natural ...

I loved this poem! The rhythmic feel of this poem was amazing. The way everything made sense, but didn't. I loved it!!

I loved the first line! The way you grabbed the attention and brought in down on that one word (LIAR). You brought all the emotion into hate, which played well ...

I really loved the way the progressions made sense. When you made a statement, it easily worked into the other. I love this poem and it's simplicity. Keep up the ...

"done a road most my visitors take" This particular quote makes me think that the devil himself is the speaker in red. I also liked how it was divided into ...

I love the way it actually speaks to you when you read it. This really does belong in lyric form and in that form this could be really amazing. If ...

I think that your poem was quiete good.I liked the dramatic phrases and the over all feel of the poem. However you could improve it by making the following lines ...

I so agree with all of the comments. This piece has be really confusing me with wether or not is should be a song, and why it begins the way ...

This is a work in progress, but I'm looking for feedback. It’s Monday Feels like Sunday In this land It’s finally time to let go of your hand Daddy I'm ...