misstoria

This was pretty good, I liked the style of writing you used for this. Keep it up!

WOW!!! I loved it!! It was crazy, odd and surprising. This is an amazing piece, I'm glad you would never eat your baby.

Immortal wings on hence thy fly, High above the world you soar; On the threshold of life and death, Never uttering a word. You call for me, from up above, ...

Wow! This was really amazing.

I want to read more! That was really amazing! I love the emotion and feeling in this piece. My only critique is the character switch. I loved the switch, but ...

Masculine embrace sounds acward, you may what to change that, otherwise wow. You took such a simple subject and made it sound so amazing.

Wow that was amazing!! I loved the line about tying your shoes in all the wrong places. I have never seen such an amzing poet that can make anything work. ...

I really like this. THe emotion seems completly real and stron. I'm only gonna to pick on the live "to everything you've guest". I'm not sure what you mean to ...

I'm from America and i actually like this. It has great emotion and it does frame america. Even thiugh we have a black president doesn't mean we like him. I ...

I loved it!! At first I found it a little shaking when you mentioned butter and tongue bathing, but it is quite nice. THe last line was amazing, a great ...

I really liked this poem, because it seems to represent today's generation.I like that this feels like a battlecry. My favorite part was We are young And we are roaring, ...

Is that a real conversation with Cleverbot? I really like it anyway, even if it's not.

This was quite great, keep it up!

I loved this! It's orignal and very funny. Keep it up!

I absolutely love this!! The way you potrayed a confliction of emotions is amazing. I'm not sure if you meant for it to, but this poem potrays a confliction of ...