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Re: Misstoria's Poetry
Poem 6 You expect me to wait, for you to save me, you think i'm weak and ever unchanging. You call me delicate, priceless and pure, but you haven't been ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: The Bench
Those would make a good TV show. You could call it "The Bench", thats how much I liked these sketches. Probably;y wasn't any help, but I tried.
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Misstoria's Poetry
Poem 5 Fire filled the skies, little Children cried, so very many died. It wasn’t like you said, we didn’t find the rest of the world dead. Only are people, ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Ideas and Inspiration!
What i'm reading always inspires me. My last NaPo poem was about the book i'm reading. I also recomend watching a good movie, that can always give youa good starting ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Misstoria's Poetry
Poem 4 Fire and brimstone, fall from the sky, run now or you will be fried. Only us Believers will be saved for you didn’t listen, you were afraid. It’s ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: How Can I?
I absolutely, positively loved this poem!!! The emotions were spectacular and I loved how it felt like I was reading someones diary. Keep up the amazing work!!
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Misstoria's Poetry
Poem 3 The scarlet voice calls to me, “We will win, you shall see” Did we win, when we fell? Demons now, the angels of hell. Never conquering anything, but ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Misstoria's Poetry
Poem 2 If only I believed What I see If only I conceived the greatest dream If only I exisisted among the aboves If only, If only, I was. Wrote ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Misstoria's Poetry
My sad attempt at poetry. Poem 1 You love me, you don’t Care, then you leave. Break my heart, make me cry. Tell me a truth tell me a lie ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Poetry Contest
This poem was written by me and OptimisimUnderRain The kids sat here anxiously, waiting for that final click. Staring apprehensively, tick tock tick. No matter where you were, figity children ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: He
I loved this! The emotion and inner confusion really came out at the beginning, and it really worked. I also liked that both of the male characters in this piece ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: Sanity vs. Love
Loved this!!!! The emotion is great and the topic is very easy to relate to. I like the overall flow of this poem, keep up the good work!
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: gone
This was nice but all too short. It seemed like as soon as the feelings got deep you took everything away. I agree of Gracie on the line "without you ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: If You Only Knew My Name
Absolutely adored this poem. I really admired the orignality in this piece. I can see the true emotions in this poem, but i can also see the self conflict, which ...
Mar 17, 2011 -
Re: cigarette smoke
I loved this! The emotion was great, and the countdown was genius! Keep it up!
Mar 5, 2011
