misstoria

I really liked this piece, but I have a few nit-picks. She's gone. She has already moved to Los Angeles and left me here, alone. I will never see her ...

This was a very good piece. The second person prespective made it stand out, and have a different feel. The beginning convinced you to read it, which is what a ...

A friend of mine asked me to post this piece, hope you like it. Field Hospital, Somewhere in Western Europe May 3rd 10:00 p.m. Year Unknown A scream, yes a ...

I adored the story to this poem, but the flow was really off. I also felt like it was less like a poem and more like someone talking to themselves. ...

I really liked this. I almost felt guilty reading this because it seemed so real. I also absolutely loved your plan A, so cliché. I can't find any mistakes in ...

I absoultelty adored this piece! It had a really good flow and the imagery worked well. My only thing is that rioty is not a word. Otherwise this was really ...

I really loved this, it was short but conveyed a lot of feeling. Even though the topic is a little overused you used the topic in a diffrent way, which ...

I really liked the plot to this, but the details were slightly confused. I also agree with housecat when she says it should be more realistic. The speaker mentions that ...

No, it is not, I wrote this one day while I was watching a movie about the berlin wall.

One hand rested on the wheel, the other on my bound hands. He kept glancing into my eyes, smiling, like a predator looking at his prey. I was scared beyond ...

Poem 11 Rebel against authority questions actions, make them see, we will be what we want to be. No more lessons, no more "talks", we will rock, what we rock. ...

Poem 10 Fire flew, pain and bullets dead in a minute, before you knew it. Who would have guessed, that we would bring Armageddon? Our own fault that we would ...

Poem 9 Emerald seas, Emerald cities, far beyong dead destinies. Little children roam and play, not afraid ot the next day. No one wavers in resolve, for once they are, ...

Poem 8 Long ago my dark eyes closed, hiding secrets and lies. I laid in silence, waiting for nothing and none, wishing to die. Like a thief in the night, ...

Poem 7 You believe i am helpless, vulnerable to your disease, but i'm stronger than you think. I'm not the princess, to your knight, and I don't need your endless ...