misstoria

I quite liked this, but there were a few issues. First of all poetry needs punctuation now like stories. Even if you how it reads others don't. I very much ...

I personally quite liked this piece, yes it was of unusual format, but the point was there. Do not let some opinions get you down, keep writing !!!

This place, is magic to me, it's where we met on a summers night, you were smiling, and we danced till sunrise. This place is enchanted, it can take me ...

This is an amazing piece of poetry. Void, empty, hollow inside My dreams have fled, my hopes have died Existence has no reason Life's just passing with each season This ...

I really love this! The emotions are very raw in this poem. It seems like this poem can relate to a variety of people. This was my favorite part: He ...

I can do what I want, Not give A care, dye my hair. I can drive to Mexico in the middle of the night, just to see Tijuana sunlight. Dance ...

I thought this was pretty good. The emotions are really strong, and it has a lot of feeling, but the punctuation is off. Lost him, Lost a friend, Made me ...

I really liked this poem, but i fell it needs a complete of tweaks I can’t believe you think it works like that, You want to play it like that? ...

Everyone makes mistakes, no one is perfect, not even me. I wasn't a pretty face, or extreme brain, I wasn’t anything more than average, but for some reason he chose ...

I'm in the process of writing a novel. I'm on chapter 4 but still not sure where i'm heading with it. The story revolves around a young girl who is ...

This was actually wrote for a poetry contest. It is meant to summarize the song Hurt by Johnny Cash. The dark parts of poem are actually very real in the ...

I've never been worth a dime, but you call me queen. I'm nothing but a joker here to make your mind reel. You pay me to rule, to laugh, to ...

This is a great piece I just feel that can be choppy in parts. It makes sense, but it can be hard to put together. i recomened you re-read it ...

Absolutely loved this!! At first the hap hazard style threw me off, but then I got it. The main-character seemed cocky, which really made this interesting. When the character admitted ...

1. Dear John by Nicholas Sparks It was okay untill she married a guy she didnt even love while her true love was at war 2. Vampire Diaries by L.J. ...