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Re: The Ballad of the Swede
I quite enjoyed this piece, I love poems that rhyme. Roaring waves told the tale of the deep, O’er the grave where sailors sleep. The Swede’s fear showed; sweat wet ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: The Ballad of the Swede
I quite enjoyed this piece, I love poems that rhyme. Roaring waves told the tale of the deep, O’er the grave where sailors sleep. The Swede’s fear showed; sweat wet ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: New Word Contest Entry
When I clicked on this link I was surprised to find an entry like this, but it grew on me. It was clever of you to write short little stories ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Give me Love
Sweep me off my feet like Prince charming, rescue me. Pull me out of this mess, show me your better than the rest. In a bright eyed way I love ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: I'm A Jesus Freak
Wow, I loved this poem. The emotions and story were really true. So, you believe in God? Then make him make my momma come back. I can't, I say. [color=#FF0000here ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Tactics in witty poetry
I very much enjoyed this poem, it is completely true. Poetry is about writing what you want to, and having fun with it. This poem really spoke the truth. Keep ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Dating Sucks
A rogue raindrop finds its way to the pale skin of my overly large forehead. I don’t have the strength or want to wipe it away so I let it ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: You know you love him.
I really enjoyed this poem. The unique format gives you the perception that the narrator is someone who is speaking to the subjects mind. I enjoyed the truth and the ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: As she walks by. . . When she gets home
As she walks by you, you notice her beauty. You notice her smile, her stance, her grace. She looks invincible, strong, and pure. Her smile shines for miles and miles. ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: A Redneck Thanksgiving
Picture-331[1].png Grandpa's yelling kill them all, screaming at the guy with the pigskin ball. Grandma's in the kitchen yapping about politics uncle Ned screams put a sock in it. Lilly's ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: The Brightest Morning
I absolutely love this poem! This is a really unique poem and I love it. If I could find the brightest morning, I would keep it in a bottle So ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Longing to be with you.
Your olive skin as soft as the waves rolling to the shore, Your deep green eyes beckon me in, Deadlier than a cold stare from Medusa. I love this stanza!! ...
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: Rain
I really liked this! Your word choice was quite impeccable. I quite enjoy the every line rhymes, it gae it a very whimsy feel. The over all mood of this ...
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: Love is
Love is forgetting my birthday, then singing Never Shout Never down the hallways, just for me. Love is faking sick so we can spend the day, Up to our knees ...
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: Culprit
I really loved your poem, but I added a few suggestions and comments. Keep writing! Culprit Ecstatic, she leaps from the pyre of her maker I like this line and ...
Nov 22, 2011
