misstoria

I'm not completely sure about the title so please leave suggestions. The pain washes over me like my yesterdays getting revenge for the sins of my past. I'm paralyzed with ...

They used to be so in love, like two birds of a feather, tethered together forever. She hovered protectively, meeting his every need, loving him faithfully. He held her tight ...

Hey Artsy, I'd like a review. Here's the link: viewtopic.php?f=8&t=92052 This is a romantic poem i just came up with. If you want a review I'll help you out.

When you touch me I feel rain, running down my spine, like a thunderstorm in mid july. You look at me like I'm perfect, but I'm not, thats for sure. ...

As some insight let me explain what i was expressing in this poem. This piece was written in a very bad time in my life when I lost my best ...

A guy with a bucket on his head. Misstoria

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Never ending, the earth shatters, to watch my resolve fall away. Tears hit the ground, like little pools of blood, falling from the clouds. Followed by the angry rants, of ...

I really enjoyed this! Count the beads of a rosary necklace, my sweet, and save how bout using "say" instead of save a few blessings for me. I like this ...

Hi!! I see this is your first poem, so welcome to YWS. I really liked this poem because I understand the feeling, however others may not so you have to ...

This a series of poems about a friend of mine that I lost to suicide. I wrote them in a fit of sadness, annd appreciate any and all reviews. BEFORE ...

I absoultely love this piece! The emotions are rawl and true, which is a rare find. I think this is really great, but could use a little work. Ethan quickly ...

I really enjoyed this rant/poem even though it didn't fit the usual flow of poetry I still enjoyed it. Your beauty is incomparable Much like the sun, The surroundings disappear, ...

The first poem is about faith, the second is about a project I was asked to do in Spanish, and the third is about Cassie Bernall. FAITH The plane between ...

See that man, o simple, the one with the purple dimples. How about the one in his bloomers, riding my daddy's unicycle. I'm quite found of old miss. Lyla, ten ...