misspyschorocker

I have a youtube account, I just don't post stuff on there :P Anyway, just read the rules and you'll do fine. PM me if you need anything!

Banned not for banning two people in one post. HA.

I'm 99% sure its reverto ut astrum. But I could be wrong. Hope this helped.

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Wow, I actually never really read fantasy novels unless they REALLY interest me. And this REALLY interests me. I hate those fantasy stories with the weird names and the alternative ...

If the author made a character smoke right out of a stereotype, then yeah it would bother me. But if it added to the story, of if it told something ...

Just a few quick notes. I think how you said "human and enchanted alike" in the first paragraph was good, so we know what we're dealing with, however I think ...

I don't like the first paragraph. Maybe you should just delete it altogether and incorporate the necessary information in with the 2nd one?

HAHAH here are some of my favorites: beautiful girls In Your Pants chop chop in your pants gone so young in your pants youre the one in your pants let ...

Oh I read this too (in the 8th grade). I loved it. The theme that we took from it was that traditions aren't always right. It left me totally speechless.

Is there such a thing as "too much" description? Because if so, you did it. I'd rather read about the plot than what they are all wearing, and I was ...

This should be on the fiction boards. You need to learn how to separate dialogue and correct grammar and all that. No one will want to read this if there ...

I really like it actually. Even though, yeah, it could come pretty cliched, as long as you avoid that then it'll all be good. I would read this, and please ...