misspriss

cocoangel-Did you post HER story over again so you could get points? Augh. Anyway, there are a lot of grammar mistakes (don't worry, everyone has them), so I suggest you ...

Your right, I was not helpful, I'm sorry, but what I was going to say in that post before I about fainted (weak stomach, hate blood, I don't know why ...

I like it! And I agree with Arieda up there about the grinning into someones eye (or whatever it was) and she suggested just to say he was grinning. However, ...

It's good except for a few grammar mistakes like heals (heels) or you could say palms and make it clearer to the reader. And when you said miss-pris (I think ...

When Pamela smiles, I believe the correct way to spell it would be cunningly instead of cunning. I'm not trying to be a snob or anything. “Good, then it is ...