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((Umm...just to let you know {so you don't think it's the gem doing the magic} she make foliage grow with her natural elf powers, that will come in to the ...

((Ah. But you DID jump out of the tree. See?)) "Hello Zelles,"Aro said smoothly jumping out of the tree. "What are you doing out here? And why have you trapped ...

But we're not trying to gang up on you jearjio. :wink: After all, this is only your first post in this storybook.

(I realize my mistake and altered my post, is this correct now?) Pretending to be asleep, Carmenia peered from beneath her lashes. She caught sight of something lurking in the ...

Uh...jearjio, she's on the rocks ledge hidden from their view. Not on a stump. :shock: But that's ok :) ...could you change it though? I mean, it's kind of lame ...

elein, This is in storybook, *laughs a little* this is the second page. :D But thanks for the critique!

Breathing shallowly, Alex made as little noise as possible, and tried not to look down at rushing river far below. Her hiding place was a small ledge that jutted out ...

Did this all of the sudden die? :?

Alex took a step back, so near to the edge that a strong wind could have blown her off. But that was not what she was focusing on at the ...

I am guessing you want me to finish the sentence so I will. He brought another to his bow, drawing the string back when..... It snapped. His trusty bow, something ...

Hey, will someone PM me when this Storybook starts up again? Please? I'd like to make a character.

Okay, I have no idea what you just said...could you put it in simpler terms...please?

I'm confused! And I feel like an idiot for still being confused but that doesn't help matters, I'm sorry that I keep posting asking questions, but I don't understand. Let ...

Alexandria carefully cut the strip of raw venison in half. Though every inch of her wanted to hastily build a fire and after probably scorching the meat in her haste, ...

Alexandria had been sleeping when she was awakened by a deer moving nearby. Food! She would finally be able to fill her ravenously hungry stomach. Ever since the village had ...