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Leaning against the bar counter, Alana pushed a few dark brown curls out of her face and pursing her lips with thought, she looked over the tavern visitors, which consisted ...

((Sorry I haven't posted in SO long!!!!)) As he walked along with Baer, Ruben glanced at the younger girl. She was actually kinda cute, but she was just another mission ...

Honestly, I'm tired of just sitting around discussing how and when we are going to leave on our mission (in the storybook). Let's just get up and go!

Ahh...the title sad...

I don't like the idea of the battle happening before the journey. Perhaps we could have a small battle near the beginning of the journey, but wouldn't it be best ...

Her boots clicking with every step on the marble, Aenda strode into the room and quickly took a seat. There would be no planning going on without her. Flicking her ...

((It's fine...we all make mistakes.))

((Everyone, I'm sorry, but I think everyone's character is just a little too powerful {mine included, yes}. Darchoco, I doubt the King would stand for that, and midnightwolf92, I have ...

So...it's over? Hmmmm. I would be interested in a sequel, if anyone else is.

((fallingstar, I'm thinking you need to either have Aliena follow them secretly so they have to have her come with them, or think up a darn good reason why a ...

((Aenda doesn't really have much against Aliena, Aenda is just mad because they're sitting around doing nothing, fallingstar. Just thought I'd let you know.)) Aenda surveyed the scene and shook ...

Raking his fingers through his curly, raven black hair, Ruben sighed heavily. Why me? he thought, why? He was in a terrible situation. He had three options, go back to ...

Interesting...I'll try and post soon.

I'll try too, sorry I haven't been on for a while. :(

(What a perfect way to introduce her! Go author13! :)) Oh no. No. This could not be happening. Tyler carried her to a grassy spot by the side of the ...