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Re: Anne's Story
It's good except for a few grammar mistakes like heals (heels) or you could say palms and make it clearer to the reader. And when you said miss-pris (I think ...
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Re: The Black Bandit ~ By Anna Nolte ~ Part 1
The Black Bandit By Anna Nolte Chapter I A tall man with a sinister countenance approached a shorter man that was livid with rage. “Has he struck again?” “Yes, damn ...
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Re: Dramatic Ends
I don't usually write sad stuff like this but let me know what you think. My breath clouds the frosty air Dogs bark loudly They are coming I climb a ...
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Re: Do you?
Is this REALLY stupid? Or is it good? Do you ever have that feeling that your being watched? Do you? Do you ever have that feeling that your not alone? ...
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Re: Rumors 'bout Mr. Brown
This is my first poem that I've composed so I bet it's really bad, but there it is. There are rumors in the town They say 'tis 'bout Mr. Brown ...
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Re: Kiss the Damsel Chapter One
When Pamela smiles, I believe the correct way to spell it would be cunningly instead of cunning. I'm not trying to be a snob or anything. “Good, then it is ...
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Re: Pretty Poisoned Lady - HFC
Your very good!
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