misspriss

I know that I added some features on your character, I hope your okay with that, but you didn't supply much information about her. If you aren't happy with some ...

Hello! I'm misspriss!

I'm sorry, but if your really 13 years old I suggest you go take writing classes for three years and come back and try to patch up your reputation. I'm ...

9/10 because it's true!

just as soon the stupid roadrunner stood still long enough for Dad to take a picture... bzzbzzbzz . No film. Well, for as far away as Dad was I could ...

Oh! I just realized that you meant for the person writing the story to fill out the form with their information and not the characters. Could you tell me a ...

I am interested in joining but before I do, I was wondering if you could fill out the joining form just so I could know a little about your character. ...

Oh dear! I'm sorry! I didn't notice that cocoangel had posted the story and that she was adding on to it! :oops:

Wow! This is great! I agree, you should flesh it out a bit to keep it from saying "she died then he died," you know what I mean? Anyway, WOW ...

RULES: 1. This can be a Adventure/Fantasy. 2. No more than seven people can insert their character in this story. 3. Please write nicely and be committed to posting! *my ...

I'd like to create a person in your story and if you let me be in it I promise to be commited. I get on almost every day. I'd really ...

cocoangel-Did you post HER story over again so you could get points? Augh. Anyway, there are a lot of grammar mistakes (don't worry, everyone has them), so I suggest you ...

Your right, I was not helpful, I'm sorry, but what I was going to say in that post before I about fainted (weak stomach, hate blood, I don't know why ...

I am sorry, but as I read this I became slightly nausiated and started seeing spots, in fact, I still am.

I like it! And I agree with Arieda up there about the grinning into someones eye (or whatever it was) and she suggested just to say he was grinning. However, ...