misspriss

Oh ok! Do you think eyes that change color to her emotions would be cool? If not, I'll just ditch the whole color changing thing. :) About the weather power...I ...

Alright everyone, here is the fully edited version of my characters profile. If you see anything you have a problem with, please tell me. Full name: Carmenia (Car-mean-yuh) Virsetil Gender: ...

Wow! I love how you did this! It made me want to laugh. My favorite thing about it is the suprise ending, I also love how they both actually want ...

For me, one of the most stressed parts is My brain in doubt. But the "Boxed in, Locked out, seems fine to me.

I like it! Of course, I don't know much about poetry, but I like it! :-)

9/10 I don't get it, but it makes me want to laugh anyway...I'm weird.

Pieces of Black Walnut had done it, concluded Elainora angrily as she crouched closer to her horses right forefoot. Gently running her fingers down his leg she saw that it ...

7/10 I...don't get it. I believe it's an inside joke. But! It DOES sound like it SHOULD be funny.

Speaking softly to her loyal horse, he slowed and she slipped off him. She patted his inky black muzzle, he was worn out. She would have to make shelter here. ...

(Ahhhhh! You do make me curious!) After drinking her fill from the river, and greatly refreshing herself, Elainora retrieved a little leather pouch out of her small pack and munched ...

Hello! Umm...what is a nosferatu? :oops: And, by the way, you may enter your character right now if you want. Oh, and, I will be gentle, this is my first ...

Do you mean to say magick instead of magic? Anyway, there are A LOT of grammar mistakes, so I suggest you read this aloud to yourself and I think you ...

Mysterious but bewitchingly beautiful, Elainora trailed her long, slender fingers in the crystal clear stream water. She noticed her reflection in the rippling water and tucked a lock of long ...

A short verse about rude customers. Our customers are very rude And so we serve them fatty foods And then their arterys will clog Their hearts will fail them in ...

I loved making this because as I wrote it I felt the emotions the characters did and it was like I was in my own world, with just me and ...