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Re: Elemental chapter 1
This is good...but you skipped over some punctuations. I suggest you read this out loud to yourself and imagine yourself being one of the characters. Where would you normally pause? ...
Dec 30, 2006 -
Re: Poorly Kept Girl
Wow! Way to go!
Dec 30, 2006 -
Re: A Pirate's Life For Me
Hey, will someone PM me when this Storybook starts up again? Please? I'd like to make a character.
Dec 29, 2006 -
Re: Disc World Themed Storybook
Okay, I have no idea what you just said...could you put it in simpler terms...please?
Dec 29, 2006 -
Re: What did you get for Christmas/Other Holiday?
An MP3 Player, Money, Silk PJ's (Yay!), and a matching roller suitcase and carry-on. :-) I'm happy.
Dec 29, 2006 -
Re: Rate avatars!!!!
9/10 It's sad...*sniff*
Dec 29, 2006 -
Re: Journey Into the North
I'm confused! And I feel like an idiot for still being confused but that doesn't help matters, I'm sorry that I keep posting asking questions, but I don't understand. Let ...
Dec 29, 2006 -
Re: Rate avatars!!!!
Uh, well, I'm not quite sure how to rate it, but I guess I like 9/10.
Dec 29, 2006 -
Re: Join My Storybook
Yes! That's a great idea! *bear hug*
Dec 29, 2006 -
Re: Join My Storybook
Umm--excuse me--why? *confused and slightly saddened face* I thought you could post pretty much anything in The Lounge, so it's not like I'm posting this in a wrong section is ...
Dec 29, 2006 -
Re: Join My Storybook
Join my storybook. It's the one that says "Good Writers Needed". Have fun!
Dec 29, 2006 -
Re: Nintendo Wii
Yep! They do!
Dec 28, 2006 -
Re: 6 Word Stories
I've never done this before...but here is one I just made up, Her heart was beating, but broken.
Dec 28, 2006 -
Re: The Devil Deals in Antiques
That is such a hooker! Wow! As you probably noticed, I like it. I didn't find anything wrong with I guess I can't really critique it. But it does give ...
Dec 27, 2006 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You.
4/10, I don't get it, so I'll assume it's a private joke, and private jokes just aren't funny for people who aren't in on it....
Dec 27, 2006
