misspriss

Are you reseting EVERYONE'S points or just the featured members?

I didn't get to read all of it, I'll read the rest when I have more time. These are some errors I found... I it weren’t for those highwaymen Did ...

Oh! I loved The Blue Sword, I believe the author is Robin McKinley. :-)

I really have no clue, but I'm going to critque your post. ;-) Firstly, capitilize your i's, it shows a lack of confidence and self-respect if you don't. Secondly, when ...

Wow, well, I did have something to say, but Phorcys pretty much just said it, so I guess I'll have to be one of the people who clap you on ...

It was a bad joke, I'm sorry, but it wasn't even that funny, plus a little crude. The ending kind of left me with a shocked I'm-obligated-to-laugh feeling. Believe me ...

You write… What you think, You think… what you see, You see… what you feel, That’s what we say You write your feelings. This word makes almost no sense whatsoever. ...

I agree with Phorcys, and I didn't even really hear any rhythm.

Oh. What can I say? It's sooo...fantastically weird and haunting. Congratulations, you've just given me the weirdest sensation ever. It's almost like I enjoyed it yet...I hated it. Hmm...I will ...

This certeinly needs some capitilization--I'm a capitilazation natzi :-)--capitilize Jesus.

This is good, but I think it would be better if you capitilized your i's. :-)

It was very well written, and I'm not sure if someone already said this but when you said, "A fair-haired, pale maiden with pools of blue and full red lips." ...

Hehee. That's funny Claudette. :D This is pretty, but, what is it? Can you tell me?

Awww! How sweet! This is such a wonderful story, however, I did find several typing errors, like you said claming instead of calming at one point. Anyway, I'm going to ...

It's good, but I'm not a poetry person, so I wouldn't know much about poetry, but please, PLEASE, capitalize your I's. A shrink would say that it shows lack of ...