misspriss

I loved this! it was so wonderful! I really, really enjoyed it. I think everyone pretty much covered everything I saw up there, so I guess I'll be the that ...

I...don't really understand this. The writing is magnificint, good form, spacing, spelling, grammar (from what I could see), but I just don't get it. The memories and thoughts are beautiful ...

This was good and very descriptive and really made you think back. Very vintage. Cool. Anway, I didn't get this part... Fun mirrors make you Dance and hop slowly, Unsure ...

I like it too, *starts to sing in a carefree voice (slightly off key)* The Waves, The Waves, The Wonderful, Glorious Waves! How They Move. In And Out, Up And ...

Very fact, I know a boy who started The Weekly Ostracizer (a myspace group you can join for free) and he decided to ostracize the stupid christmas movies that come ...

Thank you for the least someone enjoyed it. (Not that I didn't appreciate the other critiques, it's just that it's nice to know someone like it, right?)

Ok, gross. Sorry but this should DEFINTILY be rated R! It said that if it's about sex (which it is) then it should be rated R in the rules. But ...

elein, This is in storybook, *laughs a little* this is the second page. :D But thanks for the critique!

Breathing shallowly, Alex made as little noise as possible, and tried not to look down at rushing river far below. Her hiding place was a small ledge that jutted out ...

*sigh* Phorcys, your right...I'll review MUCH better next time.

I was kinda rushed when I made it, thank you for the feedback!

The Confused Princess By Anna Nolte Once upon a time, there was a very, very confused princess, who could never make up her mind. Whether it was deciding to have ...

Did this all of the sudden die? :?

Alex took a step back, so near to the edge that a strong wind could have blown her off. But that was not what she was focusing on at the ...

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: That is the most hilarious thing I've heard all day!