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I didn't find it boring. I found it interesting...the only place that my attention drifted was at the "meeting" or whatever it is. Just try and make that a little ...

It's good...I like it, however, in the first chapter I got the impression that they were in an airplane...maybe I was just being unobservant...

Carmenia surveyed the unconscious men, pondering on what would be the best way to wake them. She looked at Finn, and saw that she was the one who needed the ...

Alex looked at Aro in disbelief. "Good luck with that," She said with a smirk, "And I was just getting to like you, but it seems to me you and ...

Hey black_wings, you should reread my storybook and see some rosethorns last posts. You'll see why it's your turn....

Carmenia couldn't move. After falling and slamming into the hard ground someone fell on top of her. "Get off me!" She shouted, but it came out muffled, and sounded more ...

Wrapping her arms around herself for warmth, Carmenia glanced at Valin. I sure hope he knows what he's doing, she thought, observing the grim surrounding. The flickering torches shed enough ...

Well...she'll have to wait a we ARE far enough away...but it might work...

Here is a picture of what Carmenia looks like. Except with pointed ears and differant clothes....

Mhmm... Personally, there has just been SO much fighting. *gets down on hands and knee's* Can't we please...please, get on to something besides fighting the stupid goblins? I like the ...

Mhmm...that's not very much to go on... I want to be a Dermatologist's Assistant when I get older! :P

I think I googled it or something...but now I'm an avid advertiser of the YWS baby! Woohoo! I tell everyone about it and how badly I'm hooked...getting on here multiple ...

I know I pretend to be my character all the time. My favorite story I'm writing is called The Black Bandit and when I wrote it, I had the best ...

Carmenia woke with a start. Everything was fine, it was a nightmare, that's all. She pulled the blanket closer around herself. How did she get it? She wondered, stroking the ...

Hey, thanks for cluing me in on what's happening!