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Any more critique? Hmm?

Alana clenched her teeth. This was not good. Not good at all. All she had wanted was to discover some information that might be worth something, and now she was ...

Okay, well, I'm not going to be able to post anymore on my character, so I have to quit. Sorry guys, and I hope this storybook does well!

Okay, I'm sorry, but I'm not going to be able to post on Marrissa anymore. Well, actually, it's been a long time since I posted on her anyway, but...yeah. Well, ...

Chandi, thanks for the constructive critique, but I have a confession. *sigh* I was the one who put the "dot dot dot" at the beggining. Anyway, I just thought it ...

Fand, let me just say, AWESOME JOB! *does a happy dance* I LOVE how Alana entered the picture, and the way you described her is so...HER. :)

Okay, so, we haven't left yet, and I had an idea. Alright. The only one who doesn't seem to mind killing a woman is Valin, right? Well, I was thinking, ...

Can someone please critique? Don't you understand? I'm giving you *the chance* to ~gasp~ be as harsh as you like!

Um, just so you guys know, I'm going on "vacation". I'm a goin' tuh Tennessee yawl! Anyway, I will have SOME computer access, but I just thought you should know. ...

Name: Lucina Axtrovea (Lou-sin-uh Axe-trove-ee-uh) Nicknames: The Raven (because of her long black hair) OR Luc (pronounced "Luke"".) Age: 20 Appearance: Position: Captain of the Black Plague Picture

I'm homeschooled myself! Welcome, and I hope I see more of you!

Salutations and welcome Twinflower! It's good to have you! I can't wait to see you 'round!

Hmmm. Okay. Perhaps there is something in her history? Phooey. I don't know.

*waves hand wildly around like a little kid* I-I-I-I've never done this before. B-But it looks exciting!! *totally nervous* WHEN DOES IT START?!????!!????

Do you see my pig avatar? Yes, I collapsed my resolve. Peer pressure was too much. :-) I went piggy.