misslindseyk

Many thanks for your review! Do you recommend that I combine the "O" lines with their respective next lines (ex: O, how you...) or do you advise me to take ...

O How you Beckon me; O How you Call to me; O How twilight Dances upon your Derelict surface. The moonlight Caresses your Every feature. The stars wink And smile ...

O, my head is swimming. I just can’t stop spinning. If I look back to the beginning, All I can see is you grinning. But now that we are sinning, ...

I both agree and disagree with your comment regarding love. Love can stir quite a variety of emotions and is not always conveyed in a strong or powerful manner. In ...

I am arguably no where near being a "professional" poet, but I stand by my poem as it was created as part of a whimsical card I crafted for my ...

Hi! First an foremost... What are you wanting to achieve with your poem? I feel you have the makings of a beginning but are lacking the middle and the end. ...

It's a shame that I just missed Valentines Day in regards to posting this poem. Oh well... Cheers to getting an early start on my arsenal for next year :P ...

You’ve driven me crazy Since the moment I met you. You’ve cast a spell over me That I simply can’t undo. Over time we’ve grown closer And sentiments have come ...

Many thanks!

I, like many, am very interested in creating my own book of poetry. I would very much appreciate any an all critiques that you have, as I highly value the ...

Fly away like a bird, Yet you sit there still. Your eyes wandering around, Never to cease. Your mind drifting away, Never to be found again. Your fingers tapping the ...