missbethy123

Hello again. From my latest chapter on, I'll try to cut down on the little. Reading back, I can see how annoying it must be. In regards to the Mr. ...

Glad to hear you're enjoying it. Also glad to hear that I've converted someone to realistic fiction :D Thanks for reading!

Thanks for the pointers- the "years to come" bit is gone. And thanks for the sentence rewording. All of your comments have helped a lot. :D

Hi. I'm so glad to hear you like the story. Thanks for pointing those mistakes out, and I hope you enjoy future chapters. :D

Thank you for yet another great review- they really do help a lot. The "it's" possessive thing is by far my worst writing habit. I can only promise that I'll ...

I apologize for the sheer number of mistakes in this. When I was writing it, I was also writing a lot of other things at the same time, with breaks ...

Thanks for your review :D It's really helpful, and allowed me to correct quite a few things. In my (maybe slightly dysfunctional) mind, Effy and Margo know that Tommy's dorm ...

thank you- I'm about half way through Chapter 3 at the moment (which will be a lot longer than this one) so an update should be coming soon :D

Hey! Thank you for the comment- my first one! I'm not entirely sure that I wrote in first-person omniscient (thanks for the terminology) on purpose. I usually write in normal ...