miss_missa07

We both know the feeling - Like, lust, love: life. But what if I told you When I feel your warm breath upon me I can’t help but be overcome ...

Oh! This is excellent! It flows together extremely well and the rhyming is superb. I'm impressed :D. I do have one suggestion, just that "Or would we forget them on ...

This has amazing imagery! A bit depressing, but I imagine that's the effect you were going off, so I like it a ton. I especially love the line "Dipping in ...