misfit-writer

Elbows nudge past me, In this vicious jungle, Nice metaphor I see his striped blue sweater, Move in the crowd, Maybe a transition here? My heart falls, Down to my ...

No, I'm about to go to school but maybe after school i will be

I really love this poem, it's amazing, wonderful i really don't have much of a critique though when you say "But that's no great a trouble, " that line doesn't ...

This is my first post! I hope you like it! And if you have any title suggestions, feel free to share! My hands are clutching my script, I watch in ...

What genre do you like to write? I mostly write poetry but i write fiction as well i never really finish my stories though and they're usually romance and of ...

I lead to a place where destruction rules, Where winds race and rush, Where water rises and crushes. Dead bodies lying idle Above rooftops You look at the houses torn ...

It really was better then the whole twilight series, I'm a fan of twilight though the writing wasn't that great your story was funny throughout the whole thing but more ...

I really loved it , excellent imagery and personification it really gives me a sense of peace and calm. It also has excellent flow and I just love to say ...

Hey I'm BB, and I'm new to YWS so far i really love it everyone has been nice but honest it's what I've been looking for since well last year ...

I was wondering if maybe I should make the blue lines a chorus and write another verse about a different reason why I can never be happy do you'll think ...

This was a really touching poem i think it's a little more narrative then whatever category this is :) one thing though towards the middle it started to get a ...

This was a really touching poem i think it's a little more narrative then whatever category this is :) one thing though towards the middle it started to get a ...

You hold me high, keeping me sane. Will you bind me to another chain? I really love this stanza it shows the dependence of the narrarator but also introduces the ...