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Re: Tied By Fate: Prologue + Chapter 1
1. Old Acquaintances “Dad, what exactly are we hunting that we have to come into this forest?” Tristan turned to his father who was beside him. They were walking in ...
Aug 30, 2009 -
Re: Forbidden Love; Chapter 1.
it's a nice story:) but maybe write the numbers as they are written like 50 = fifty? it might be more nicer:) just my advice but good job
Aug 26, 2009 -
Re: Heart in Chains 1
This is a nice story, quite interesting. Just a few grammar mistakes which others have pointed out so I won't write them again but good story overall:)
Aug 25, 2009 -
Re: A Demon's Eyes: ch.2
hmm this sounds interesting, good job:)but it needs some editing but don't worry I have grammar mistakes too, heaps :oops: but nice:)
Aug 25, 2009