mipanda19

1. Old Acquaintances “Dad, what exactly are we hunting that we have to come into this forest?” Tristan turned to his father who was beside him. They were walking in ...

I like the story so far but here's my suggestion: She was there with her long, curly brunette hair flowing beautifully at her back. Her elegant blue dress complimented her ...

it's a nice story:) but maybe write the numbers as they are written like 50 = fifty? it might be more nicer:) just my advice but good job

This is a story I've been working on:) hope you enjoy. It's a fantasy/love. In a world where corruption and deception lie at every corner a sixteen year old girl ...

This is a nice story, quite interesting. Just a few grammar mistakes which others have pointed out so I won't write them again but good story overall:)

hmm this sounds interesting, good job:)but it needs some editing but don't worry I have grammar mistakes too, heaps :oops: but nice:)