mindoverflow812

Well done KJ! I really enjoy your style. One small tip, though, check your descriptions, because some of them tend to get a little overlong. Also, there are some grammatical ...

Can I have more? That was really good. It's very hard to find a good story in present tense, but you handle it very nicely. It's a very interesting story. ...

I keep updating this, but I don't know how to tell people. Any suggestions? :?

I don't want to insult you, but this really isn't that great. The ideas are very good, and I like them, but your writing is poor. You have minimal grammar. ...

Hey, thanks for the input, guys! I just did some updating, maybe you'd like to take another look. I think it's improved.

i'm bored, so let's do something interesting. if you were an animal what would you be? or, if you had a dæmon, like in the golden compass, what would it ...

you have a very interesting style. i like it. sort of like charles dickens writes science fiction. :D this is a very good beginning. i enjoyed your descriptions and the ...

I was at half a mind to whistle at it... this should be I had half a mind to whistle at it... it think this is a very good story. ...

When Cody Burns designed Space Station-C, he had no idea what it was to become. The US government officials had come to him with a design contract and very little ...

i think that a prologue can be the best part of a story. it's there to get ur reader hooked, to make them want to keep reading. sometimes, readers won't ...

I'm new to writing Sci-Fi, I usually write historical fiction. So, I have no idea where to start. All of my ideas seem hopelessly cliche. Please help! -mindoverflow812