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I'm Mia! *Gives the person who's reading this a gianormous hug* What I can't review: Poetry. Fullstop. :P What I can review: Fantasy fiction (I love this) Other fiction And ...

Hey ofir! I'm back to review chapter one! :D Grammatical mistakes and nitpicks I opened my eyes unwillingly, staring at the boy in front of my eyes. Eyes is used ...

Hello, I'm Mia and I will be reviewing this today. :) Before I start, I wanted to tell you that your first sentence was great. It hooked me into the ...

Hey, I'll try my utter best to come! :) I sincerely hope I don't forget... -.- xxmiaxx

Hey, I'm Mia and I will be reviewing this today. :) Nitpicks and grammatical mistakes The brown marble floor looked clean enough, the tiny old love seat that was half ...

Hey Big sis! Welcome to the yws. Before I review this piece, I would point out one or two rules you may not have been familiar with since you're new ...

Hey Haha, I personally usually use times new roman. Not because I particularly like it, but because I don't bother changing it. However, I think I prefer veranda. For some ...

Hey, I have no idea when I started writing, I think I've always like to write. However, the earliest story I can remember is a sequel I wrote to the ...

Hey Maybe you could make it that one of her friends turns out to be a dark faerie, and knew all along about her powers. He/she could have been trying ...

Hey Well, obviously Annie, Ann. You can call here Anna Nana maybe? Think of her personality traits, and bring something out of that. xxmimixx

Hey I think it depends on the character. If it's a good guy smoking (with a nice personality etc), it doesn't really add anything to their character. However, if you ...

Hey! Take a break. This is the best thing you can do. Sit down, watch some T.V, read a book, eat, anything that gets you away from your story. Try ...

Hey Well, mine isn't particularly distubring: The dungeon by Llyn Reid Banks. So sad. :(

Hey June! Oh my goodness I love you! :) This is the: list of cool yws people ;) Haha I gotta make one of my own xD Thanks loads, you're ...

Hey, I'm Mia and I will be revewiing this today. Grammar/ nitpicks The old man awoke with a small gasp. His bedclothes clung to his skin with sweat, the outline ...